STILL SLEEPY AND TIRED :<

This update was supposed to be posted an hour earlier but last night my allergies were killing so i took some allergy medication so i can feel better,little did i know it was going to make me drowsy and right now I am half sleep posting this :( but I cant deny it, I feel better but I am still tired and looking forward in going to bed.

Anyways, here is the next page. the girl with the dark blue hair is annoying. when i look at her she remind me of someone I use to go to school with. she also has a nasty attitude like her.

and i feel sorry for you whores as your likely to end up on the arms of some piece of crap jackass who care nothing for you and leaves you the first timeyou get knocked up

Minako sweetie youare doing the right thing as it is said most often doing the right thing is often the hardest th o I'm pretty sure it wasn't too hard turning down those bitches

Daisy thanks and yes it is Cap's shield I supose i could tinker with my orginaly icon

Mistakes first then I shall praise this page. ^ ^

First bubble: "Insted" is spelt "Instead".

Second bubble: "suite" is the word used for like a room at a hotel. It is supposed to be "suit".

"Meserable" should be spelt "Miserable".

Also "your-self" is supposed to be one word like this, "yourself"

Minako's thought bubble: "my" should be "myself"

second panel/ Yuzuki's bubble: "Lets" should have an apostrophe "Let's" and

"definatly" should be spelled "Definitely"


Other than those spelling mistakes, this page is beautiful. All the feeling in the first panel is so thick that it could literately be a living entity.

Minako looks so gorgeous. I love how her is done up. And those breasts! Gah! So amazing. I may be female but I can't draw boobs to save my life.

OH! and Minako isn't the bitch... those three girls are. I totally hate them as they are but they are drawn wonderfully.

That's my two bits. ^ ^ <3

@akudemi: Glad you like the page. I never see my mistakes when I edit my work. but i will correct it :D

@akudemi:Ha dont feel bad Akudemi I'm a guy and I can't draw dicks as well as Tanako either I chalk it up to her being severa shades of awesome

and if you like this series you should check out her "adult" comic A Lovers Rule or !00% love bet

@Comichero: you changed your icon, why? i mean its not bad i like it and i also liked the shield. anyways, well i don't have an editor and each time i edit my work i never see my mistakes. anyways thanks for the complements guys.

@Tanako: Well Daisy th icon changed cuz I wisended up and this is the Icon of comichero as you;ll notice it is the one i use inthe formus and if you watcha ny other comic ther use gravatar it is my icon their oo makes it less confusing for people that way so they know they are conversing with the same person also this icon is gift art froma friend for my birthday last year it's based on a courtney huddleston original character drawin in my honor on the strip Luci Phurr's Imps i even go aa coule cameo's but it was drawen in my honor for my crazy awesome idea's i would spout in the comments section long and alsom my poor grammar skills as i have attendanecy to write long runnon sentaeces when i get exicted about somthing

and no wories about the mistatkes Daisy i wasn't really lookin for them so i missed them as well

@Comichero: wel i like both and i think its very kind of your friend to draw an ava for you. its really cool. as for me i like to change icons every once in a while but my main icon i use every were is a chibi head of haruhi or an image of haruhi lol. i am yet to find that one avatar that represents me but as for right now, a chibi head of haruhi is all gravy. :D